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City College of New York
ENGL B8104
Basic Writing Theory & Practice
Professor Barbara Gleason
Fall 2014

Thursday, November 27, 2014

Thoughts on "Braiding and Rhetorical Power Players"

Braiding is a wonderful image for the way in which writers can weave together the language of the many worlds in which they live to create something beautiful and powerful, especially if the writer comes from outside the mainstream. In “Braiding and Rhetorical Power Players,” Kimberly K. Gunter both describes and demonstrates how that works.
Gunter reviews recent scholarship on academic writing to show that all writing exists on a continuum from subjective to objective and quotes Paulo Freire who says they are always united. She argues for a mixed academic discourse that allows personality to intrude into a mainstream academic style that favors scientific, supposedly objective ways of knowing.
Gunter demonstrates a mixed style throughout her paper, from her description of the debate between Peter Elbow and David Bartholomae as a Steel Cage Death Match, the description of her grandmother predicting it would rain as she hung wash out to dry on the line when Gunter was a four-year-old, and in the description of academic writing as seen from space as “a knitting needle hidden in its own ball of yarn” (Even if I don’t quite know what that last example means, the image is lovely and a refreshing break from a linear argument.) Similarly, the case study that Gunter uses at the heart of her paper, that of a lesbian army cadet struggling to “braid” her opposing selves into a whole, is told with a dramatic flair.
The application of this approach to multiple or alternate discourse in a classroom of basic writers is indeed powerful. As Gunter points out, since these students live in several worlds, they can bring these lives and these languages into the classroom as an asset, or as she says, “increase their agency.” But it’s not just the students who benefit, because the practice challenges and refreshes the academic community as well.    

Tuesday, November 18, 2014

Professional Resources for Basic Writing Teachers and Scholars

Journal of Basic Writing
Archive through 2003:
http://wac.colostate.edu/jbw/
2004 to Present:
http://eric.ed.gov/?q=journal+of+basic+writing

Basic Writing e-Journal
http://bwe.ccny.cuny.edu/

Council on Basic Writing
https://cbwblog.wordpress.com/

National Writing Project
http://www.nwp.org/

Purdue University Online Writing Lab: Grammar
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/section/1/5/

University of Chicago Writing Program: Grammar Resources
http://writing-program.uchicago.edu/resources/grammar.htm


Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Thoughts on "Remediation Phase-Out at CUNY," B. Gleason

     Barbara Gleason's "Remediation Phase-Out at CUNY: The 'Equity versus Excellence' Controversy" filled in some missing pieces in my understanding of the end of open admissions at the university. I was particularly struck by the statistics having to do with the elimination of remedial courses at the senior colleges that show the decision put CUNY out of the mainstream. At the time,  94 percent of universities with a minority population of 50 percent offered remediation. CUNY eliminated it even though 65 percent of its student body were members of minority groups.

      The personalities and politics of some key members of the task force that recommended the sweeping change were also enlightening. It is interesting in hindsight to see that its chairman was Benno Schmidt, the former Yale president who was then the CEO of the Edison Project, a private, for-profit educational company. The company failed resoundingly in its core mission, demonstrating no success in raising student achievement; it limps along today as a small private business that provides peripheral educational services. It surprises me that failures like Edison's don't raise more questions about some of the assumptions on which it was based, especially its heavy reliance on testing.

     "Remediation Phase-Out at CUNY" inspires many more questions. How did the task force define the way in which open admissions lowered standards? Were faculty leaving? Was research funding down? How did CUNY plan to make the change work, if 20 percent of its applicants would no longer quality for admission?  Did the plan provide more funds to the community colleges? Were teachers to be reassigned in some way? And what kind of assessments has CUNY done since 2001 to convince its leaders that it was a move in the right direction? I look forward to learning the answers to these questions to fill in the more pieces in this puzzle.

Literacy Narrative - Second Draft

Karen Mooney
Professor Barbara Gleason
English B8109
November 8, 2014
Second Draft

Turn to the Visual
That commencement robe was far too heavy for the heat, its long, wide sleeves burying my arms, the generous folds of its fabric reaching down past my calves. Under it I wore one of the shortest dresses I had ever bought yet for once, neither of my parents complained.
They were there—mom, dad, two of my three brothers, and grandma, dad taking movies with an 8 millimeter camera, later finding out they were largely unwatchable. I think my folks were proud, but they seemed as disoriented as I was.
            Pride wasn’t exactly my strongest emotion that day either. Mostly I was confused, not sure what was next. I planned to go to graduate school to study English, the area I had settled on in the end, but I was out of money and out of steam and thought I might drift a while.
            I have absolutely no memory of sitting with my classmates during the ceremony that day. Where was my seat? Where were my parents? Did I walk across a stage and pick up my diploma? Did I feel any different when it was over?
Yet one moment of that exercise changed my life. Margaret Mead gave the commencement address. The legendary anthropologist, herself a graduate of the college, was teaching there now, and was occasionally seen around campus in these last years of her life, wrapped in a cape and navigating with the help of a tall walking stick. From her groundbreaking studies of cultures around the world, she was, perhaps, uniquely qualified to speak about the transitions an adolescent makes in becoming an adult. But she was deeply rooted in scholarship. What would she have to say about the world outside?
There is no record of Mead’s address. She must have spoken for some time, possibly giving lots of advice, since that’s what commencement speakers do. But I remember only one line, and it seemed to have nothing to do with scholarship. “Don’t ignore television,” she said. “It will shape the lives of your children and grandchildren.”
I went home for a visit after that day and took her advice—I watched television, something I hadn’t done much of during college. Grandma was my viewing companion. She liked soaps, liked talking back at the characters about their dramatic choices. My dad liked news. My younger brothers watched cartoon and kid shows. To me, most of these programs seemed superficial, foolish, out of touch with serious matters, and all of them were hung together with manipulative commercials. After a week of this I concluded, “I can fix this.” Arrogant? Optimistic? Maybe I just fell for all those admonitions to change the world that college graduates get as they’re pushed out into the world.
Back in New York, I rolled up my sleeves. Fixing TV was going to be a lot of work. Where to start? Here I was, a ‘writer’ who had authored dozens of crayoned books as a child, disappeared into books as an adolescent, and then dove headlong into literature in college. Margaret Mead, the author of many books herself, pointed in a different direction.  How could I navigate the world without being focused on the word? And how could I learn to make TV so I could fix it?
Global Village was the answer. It was one of a handful of non-profit organizations experimenting with new, small-format video equipment, on the leading edge of what the founders hoped would be a revolution in communications. The name was, of course, a nod to Marshall McLuhan, who envisioned the world’s people drawn closely together by technology. I happened to find Global Village mentioned in a book about the “counter-culture.”
I was looking to volunteer when I knocked on their door in a grungy building in Soho one afternoon.  The harried woman who clambered down the rickety wooden steps to answer, took my number and said maybe someone would call me. She never smiled and I didn’t expect much.
The phone was practically ringing as I opened the door back home. Linda, the group’s overworked office manager asked me when I could start. At first, I did the usual office work—answer phones, type letters, run errands. But soon I was trading my writing skills for the opportunity to learn. Global Village taught classes in video production and editing through the New School, and they were always looking for money to produce documentaries. In exchange for sitting in on those classes and going on shoots, I wrote grant applications and press releases. So while I was plying my skill with words, I learned to frame shots, shoot video, and tell stories by connecting one shot to another. It was a crash course in the visual--Global Village favored the cinéma vérité style, their documentaries told in pictures with no narration.
Five years later, I felt I had learned everything I could there; it was time to move on. So I ventured into the belly of the beast: I got a summer job in commercial television, ABC TV. I had applied for one in editing, which I was experienced at, but was offered one in electronic graphics instead. All I knew of that was that it involved keyboard-driven computers used mainly to type words over video images. When I found that an acquaintance of mine, a guy, who had actually operated those machines, was offered an editing job instead, I was angry. In fact, I learned, nearly every one of the people hired to do video graphics that summer was female. And I was sure it had to do with the stereotype of a woman at a typewriter
So I marched into the personnel office and asked to speak with someone. The receptionist ushered me into an office, where I met a blowsy woman in a fuzzy leopard skin dress and high-heeled boots.
“What can I help you with,” she asked with complete indifference.
I plunged right in. “I’ve been hired for the summer to operate electronic graphics machines which I have no experience at, rather than to edit which I do have experience at. And I notice that most everyone hired for graphics is a woman. I think you’ve offered me this job because I’m female.”
Leopard skin lady remained indifferent. “It’s not true,” she said. And paused. “Do you still want the job?”
I’m not sure what I expected. Did I really think she’d admit to such a thing? Well, I had said my piece, and now answered, “Yes, I still want the job.” In hindsight, I can’t believe she didn’t withdraw the offer right there.
Many women at the dawn of computers got a leg up because of this unfortunate connection between being a girl and being able to type. For them, as for me, it worked in my favor. As the machines became more sophisticated-- becoming able to move not just words but images around on the screen--so did our skills. But these were still the first generation of digital machines, and the processing was so slow that we routinely worked 15-hour shifts creating and animating those very primitive images.
One day I was assigned to create a sequence of falling leaves that would cascade over video of “Wide World of Sports” as the show went to the commercial, a bumper, as it’s called. I used the machine’s camera to capture images of leaves of varying shapes, and then shaded them from a palate of a handful of colors. For hours, I used the keyboard commands to add one leaf over the other, moving them around as if windblown across the screen, making the moves look random. The day turned to night and to day again, and I was still there with the machines, in the tiny, dark cubicle, with that monitor glowing with multi-hued pictures. The production assistant who had given me the assignment showed up after a full night’s sleep, astonished that I was still there. My eyes may have looked glazed, but they were on fire. Seeing had entered my life in a new way that long day; color had ignited my brain. When I finally went home, it was with a profound new recognition of image.
Producing came next, through a series of jobs that required the use of my writing skills again.  Researching stories, pitching them to bosses, sending convincing requests to interview subjects, and writing scripts. For the first time, I was learning when the picture should lead and when the words had to. But there was still more to learn about those images.
For an assignment on the education beat one day, I set up a shoot with a mother who complained that her son’s school wasn’t cooperating with his asthma treatment. The cameraman and I came back with lots of video—of the family in their home, of the mother and son leaving school, an interview with the school principal. I handed over the logs to the reporter who would be writing the piece this time. He looked them over.
“Where’s the money shot?” he asked.
“The what?”
“The money shot. The kid with his asthma treatment,” the reporter answered.
I didn’t have it. It was a painful lesson learned: No word count could replace the ONE shot that tells the story, the snapshot.
But the words need to be carefully chosen as well. TV words are meant for the ear, and they work best when they don’t get in the way of the picture, or when they are linked to the image directly. It’s still always a deliberate dance, but after many years communicating this way, using words alone rarely seems enough anymore.
            I am not alone. The world at large—maybe even the entire Global Village—increasingly shares a language that is as much image as word. British semiotics scholar Gunter Kress calls it society’s “turn to the visual.” He and others argue that literacy is no longer just a matter of reading and writing words. For the first time in traditional scholarship, some are even suggesting that tools other than language might be used to define a body of knowledge, to make arguments, and to interpret the world. There is abundant evidence in everyday life that this is so—from emoticons in emails, to textbooks that seem to have more images than words, to highly graphic internet pages, to international symbols in public places, and yes, to our very busy television screens.

Today, I can say with confidence, that I have not fixed television, though I may have influenced it subtly. Women like me, just by being there, have shaped some of what is reported, and spoken up for the women in our audiences. We came into the workplace as new technologies and new ways of communicating were emerging, and we grew up with them. Margaret Mead saw it coming—television and the visual drift has shaped my life, the life of my children, and doubtless one day, the lives of my grandchildren as well.